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Sep 12 2009 02:27am
It was daylight when you woke up in your ditch.
You looked up at your sky.
That, that made blue be your color
you had your knife with you too.
when you stood up there was goo all over your cloths.
Your hands were sticky.
you wiped them on your grass
so now your color was green.
Oh, lord, why did everything had to keep changing like this.
you were already getting nervous again.
your head hurt when it rang, you stood up.
Your head was almost empty, it always hurt when you woke up like this.
You crawled up out of your ditch onto the gravel road.
You began to walk.
Waiting for the rest of your life come back to you.
you can see your car parked down the road, you walked toward it.
If God was our father you thought, then satan must be our cousin.
Why didnt anyone else understand these important things.
you got to your car, tried all your doors. they were locked.
it was a red car, there was an expensive leather case laying on the seat.
across your field, you can see 2 tiny people, walking across your woods.
you began to walk towards them, now red was your color.
And of course, those little people out there. were yours too.
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Sep 12 2009 04:07am
TLDR
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Sep 12 2009 10:24am
Quote (wh0racLe @ Sat, Sep 12 2009, 10:07am)
TLDR


Idfk what that means.

Speak english.

Oh hai 30%warn!
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Sep 12 2009 10:28am
Quote (Ions @ Sat, Sep 12 2009, 12:24pm)
Idfk what that means.

Speak english.

Oh hai 30%warn!


Nice contradiction there.
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Sep 12 2009 12:15pm
too long didnt read.
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Sep 12 2009 12:54pm
Quote (Darkshade @ Sat, Sep 12 2009, 04:28pm)
Nice contradiction there.


Most of everyone knows what
"idk" means.
Add the "F" to it.

idiot.

wtf is tdlr?
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Sep 12 2009 12:55pm
Quote (aokmaster15 @ Sat, Sep 12 2009, 06:15pm)
too long didnt read.


Great musician here.
Detication at it's finest.
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Sep 13 2009 07:57am
doesnt make much sense
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Sep 13 2009 08:36am
is this supposed to be rap? No way we can evaluate it without knowing the rhyme scheme. If its for a song then it really is too long. For the most part you want something a little bit more concise and to the point. I see a bad attempt at having deep thoughtful lyrics. Your knife and make it seem like its some murderer, but then goo? Wtf is that. Making everything possesive to the character does not add anything but awkwardness. I didnt read all of it because it didnt really make sense.
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Sep 13 2009 09:29am
Quote (Ions @ Sat, Sep 12 2009, 02:54pm)
Most of everyone knows what
"idk" means.
Add the "F" to it.

idiot.

wtf is tdlr?


Everyone knows what tldr means.

So just shut the fuck up already.
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