hey good job man, I liked the song -- and I agree with weasle, the violin was a good touch. Your voice is nice, just one thing I noticed -- you slur your voice a little and as a result you don't end up hitting some of the high notes perfectly (you fall JUST a bit short, not even by a half step, less). Imo you need to hit those notes dead on for this kind of song, especially since its slow.
other than that, beautiful :-).