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and i know the keyboard is still a lil off
and yes this is christian music
and yes i am not a great singer lol

I dislike this song for many reasons. Let me know if you would like me to elaborate.

yes plz elaborate

please adjust the volumes properly for your songs before you post them!! it ruins the whole thing, you also have to play the instruments in proper volume to ease your work.

k will remember to do this

I like it. Did you track over all the instruments yourself? It sounds different from some of the mainstream christian stuff i've been hearing lately. You should turn your vocals up some more in the mix, I can't understand the lyrics.

Vocals are mixed too low, and sounds more like nervous speaking than singing. Also, you really need to work on the keys. Guitar work wasn't bad, had a few rough spots but all in all, wasn't bad. Your biggest issue is the mixing, and the keys. If you practice your vocals a bit more, you could make them sound decent. Right now it sounds like you're talking to a cop who pulled you over.

yea i know
im gonna redo the song when i get home from florida
ill post it then and make my lyrics a lil louder



ya i tracked over em myself i played both the guitar and the piano
and i want to sound different from the mainstream christian stuff

im working on creating a whole new type of christian music
instead of praise and worship
ill call it preach and worship
so ppl can actually get goo info from music and so its not completley pointless
it will actually move you in life further

This post was edited by weasleface on Jun 18 2009 11:08am

Not a bad idea, but praise and worship always has it's place, regardless