Quote (ElWilko @ Thu, Apr 16 2009, 06:03pm)
hey there, we got a 3 tracks recorded the other day, i'd like to know any constructive criticism about us as a band.
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thanks.
I like the first song, but you've gotta work on the guitar a bit... your rhythm is way out of whack at the beginning of the song, and the main riff for the guitar is extremely choppy.
I agree with the guy above when he says the transitions are bad -- they aren't nearly as smooth as it should be. Over all it feels like you haven't practiced these songs enough together.