http://www11.zippyshare.com/v/55536006/file.html

Fruity Loops? It's alright, add some more stuff to it, make it have more flavor. :\

The beats are nice, but you could add some more depth to it.

(ie: strings, deep cello)

Thx

the background drum that is in 99% of the song makes me want to stab some one, other then that its not bad as far as it seems to me that drum was just used to much to constant don't mix the greatest with the rest of the song imo, in my mind that thumping would come before some bigger energy like music which you never really hit imo.

I'm no music expert nor am I a techno expert but I have/still listen to my share of techno/dance