http://www.soundclick.com/mbsproductions(us)

check it out, it's pretty ill for my 2nd track i ever made... as matter of fact, it's the 2nd thing i ever recorded at all. ^ ^

not bad, but you sound too fucking white hahaha. my friends brother raps too and he has that problem, sounds too white :/

Too many vocal tracks at once can make the overall sound very confusing. I don't think the individual tracks are that bad, but they're not my genre and I don't think it's anything special. I also don't think you sound very convincing with your lyrics. It's like you had nothing interesting to say so you just filled your verses with fluff.

there's only 1 song.. but thanks for criticism.

definately too proper sounding
good beat tho
could flow better in some parts but that might just be cause of the white sounding lol

lol possibly. thanks

well its good just not my kind or rap

ofc there's only one song, but there are multiple vocal tracks...

oh yea i know what ya mean