I'll take my switch blade run it through your rib cage
im insane, haven't you ever heard of this game?
im just this tame and all it takes is one mistake

ill get rid of you if i have to stay up for days
fuck it ill hang you from the town halls door way


what would i ever put in that blank spot..? I had a line there but realized it was really cheesy and not thought out.. lol i dont want to/will not show you what i had before im kind of embarressed for it. ANYWAYS, i do NOT will NOT take anyones lines they would add there.. i just need some ideas to boost my thinking process cause im drawing a blank and this is th eonly part of the song thats messed up. (besides it not having a chorus) and i might be recording this tomorrow so yea.

I think honesty and integrity are two very important aspects of writing music. Have you ever stabbed someone in the ribs or hanged them in such a fashion?

i never said i have done it before.. ofc not. i write what's on my mind, in a sick and twisted way, this was on my mind and still is therefore keeping all of it except that 1 line.

Maybe it's because that line there is missing, but I can't really tell what rhyme scheme you have going. What does the missing line need to rhyme with?

and I'm at you like a ____ that ____ then something that rhymes with mistake or something close (doesn't have to be a perfect rhyme ofc.

and I'm at you like a boat that floats in a lake.
and I'm at you like a woman bakes a cake
and I'm at you like a vampire with a stake
and I'm at you like a guest on ricky lake
and I'm at you like an inlaw that you hate
and I'm at you like a car without a brake
and I'm at you like rocket rollerskates

That was fun. Sorry, I can't help you.

the whole thing just sounds kind of generic to me, good luck with that though.

it's a start for me, im still learning, no pro.

yea, i hear ya. if you freestyle with friends at random times about random shit you'll get decent at it. while i'm no rapper, it's definitely fun to do it sometimes haha.

i cant freestyle for my life like literally of the top but if u gimme 5-10 min max i can write some pretty funny things, you should check out the freestyle thread if u wanna see some idk just was messen around but we're making a new one for this coming week i hope.