she's got the most beautiful smile i've ever seen//
gorgous body? better than dreams//
can she cook? yea better than me//
and she's got the prettiest eyes there ever can be


Ok now.. I was in the middle of this song and I'm not sure whether to keep going with it and make it into a verse or keep it like that for a solid chorus. Maybe even add 2 lines repeat for a chorus? Not sure, need a 2nd opinion.

not chorus material IMO, make it a verse.

I was never good at writtin chorus's which is why I wanted some opinions. Thanks mate.

the chorus is the part of the song that is supposed to stay with you after you hear a song. Make it a verse.



and i'm right there with you dude

lol'd at this part

thanks, i try to make my songs humerous even when they should be serious. I'm just having trouble figuring out a transition for this because obviously i can't rhyme with better than me a whole verse worth.. lol