The Jabberwocky


Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe:
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe

(Chorus)
Beware the jabberwock my son
His vile jaws will rip you to shreds
And his teeth filled with rot
As he chomps you down, bones and all

Through the forest the young one did go
Vorpal sword in hand
He prepared himself for a likely death
Willing to protect his land

(Chorus)
Beware the jabberwock my son
His vile jaws will rip you to shreds
And his teeth filled with rot
As he chomps you down, bones and all

In an uffish thought he stood
And he saw the Jabberwock
Spewing smoke and drooling, ready for its meal
Ready to do all he could
Ready to be a meal

(Chorus)
Beware the jabberwock my son
His vile jaws will rip you to shreds
And his teeth filled with rot
As he chomps you down, bones and all

With vorpal in hand
He stuck the sword into its heart
The rest of its body was torn apart
He had just feed his land

(Chorus 2)
Thou hast slain the Jabberwock?
Oh what a frabjous joy
Come quick lets celebrate
Let us Seize the day

Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe

Sing it to us.

no recording software and lack of a decent computer :/

Ummm...you didn't write this. It's a poem, written by Lewis Carrol.

Edit: Okay, so you changed some of the words. but I personally like the original version, It flows better.

This post was edited by gryphenprey on Jun 7 2008 09:41am

Nigga you just got exposed.

EXPOSED

This poem was in my 10th grade English book you jackass.

LMAO...way to steal from Lewis Carroll....

And say IF this was your song....i bet you couldn't make shit up for what it was about, what your inspiration was, or why you wrote it....

Glad to see you're original!