Hey, so, the last few days I been writting down random things that pop into my head, in order to write a new song.
Nothing great as of yet.
Just a bunch of 1 liners.
Just wondering what everyone thinks of what I got so far.
And if someone could gives some help/tips on how I could string it into a song.
Or even piece the words together better would help.
Cheers.




!I Call your Name!


"I call your name when I'm feeling helpless.
I need to rise above this.
And forget about us."


!Seize The Day! -chorus-


"I'm going to step up
Seize the day

Find a way
To make it better
To seize this day
And treat you like no other"




!Trying to find a positive.!


"living feels like dreaming
and somehow
i see myself sitting on the edge
waiting for a new day

tell me who will save me
and ill find you
and when this is all over
ill never leave your side"




"If you caught me lying
Would you hate me for it..
But what if that lying
Was only to myself
Because I thought that you loved me
But you proved me wrong again"

This post was edited by woboy_hsd on May 22 2008 10:21pm