Got a new electric song up...i think the vocals suck and they will be redo, but what do you think of the guitar?

get a condensor or ribbon mic please.... also rely more on the music not always the lyrics... get some effects on the voice sound too much a lil kid sorry. not always a fan of this type of music. get a happy song : )

imo lyrics and guitar are really really disjointed.

i think i understand what you are both saying but its hard to put it into actuality.

not really man, it takes a little bit of practice -- but just sit down and listen to what you're playing. Harmonize with it, don't just sing over it -- the best way to figure out a good tune for the song is to just sit there and listen to it and hum along with it. Well thats how I do it anyways, and its worked out for me.

If you're more of an instrument person, imagine you're solo'ing over the whole song -- take a section from it and you can pretty much turn that tune into your main chorus.

Remember to record yourself so you don't forget any revelations

Now those are words of wisdom. I wish i had recording equipment at my disposal at all times. I have to use other peoples stuff to record. Kind of a bummer huh? Ive gotten this far but i need more practice. Ive got a show this Saturday....wish me luck ive got the set list made out....

haha thanks, but they're really just something I picked up over the years while trying to ease the process for myself. good luck at that gig, you'll do fine.

Anyways, just remember, practice for a song isn't complete until you're not thinking about what you're saying anymore -- your mouth just moves automatically and all you're thinking in your head is that you're going with the music. You know that happens when you find yourself performing at a concert and not even remembering singing lol.

ive noticed that when that happens the song is always 10x better. practice practice practice.

I would never listen to it, but its not bad. At first i was like "meh" but then i got it. Keep it up man, cheers.

ha thanks