It could be me but you just look VERY uncomfortable with your right hand. Loosen up a little
and try a different grip. Also turn up that distortion/overdrive bro half the riff's you were playing
just sounded weird cause they sounded damn near clean. I suggest a different drip and perhaps
a bit of alternate picking practice.
(Sorry if this is a regurgitated post of someone else's suggestions I haven't read all 5 pages)
I guess my best (which worked in my case) is to learn one REALLY difficult song. Something along the
line's of Nothing Else Matter's by Metallica (which isn't hard to someone who's been playing for a while
but will be very hard to a beginner) and just learn ALL the different dynamic's and flow's of the song.
Learning one difficult song will be better for you in the long run then learning a bunch of easy one riff
song's.
THAT'S HOW I SEE IT. My personal opinion of course.
Overall though dude your coming along nicely, just keep working at it dude you'll be shreddin in no time
EDIT:
As weird as it sound's actually if you are still young enough join a band class... Only for a year or two if you don't like
it. I did that and I learned TONS of thing's. Timing, dynamic's and attention to detail just to name a few. And now a day's
there are some hot ass chick's in band so it's not as bad as people make it out to be. If your serious about it, then you could
do the band thing or take guitar lesson's or piano lesson's (both C instrument's). Theory isn't an important part of writing unless
your technical as fuck. Flow and comfort are important, even still, just because you feel comfortable doesn't mean that you
are playing correctly. For example your grip, I noticed it limited your ability to alternate pick and would also be difficult to do pinch
harmonic's and palm mute's. I would say work on your grip first then worry about everything else.
This post was edited by Reversion2 on Apr 19 2009 09:27pm