where is the difference? Cuz I don't give a shit what ppl think. and i never said don't work on nothing. I guess some ppl forgot how to read and I didn't even use big words.

lol'd

I think it's best for an aspiring music maker to hear harsh criticism or they won't get any better imo.

keep practicing mate just learn how to mix and add more to your song music wise Turn the vocals down a bit
and at the end where you start to just talk add more passion behind it!! don't just say it like your reading it say it like your angry at people ya know making a point!

Its good to hear a rapper on this forum who's not just swareing coz he thinks its kool, i enjoyed it mate and i don't listen to rap keep it up tho

you got the idea i guess but it still sounds too amateur. my neighbors are starting to buy beats and attempting to get into the industry but honestly you sound a lot like them, just a few guys trying to make it out of their own little studio program on their computer that syncs their beats with their vocals. also you sound too relaxed and not into what youre doing. you may feel otherwise but if i had heard that id think the artist was only doing it for some money or fame and not because he wanted to get a message out there. but keep trying cause what the fuck do i know, you could be signing record deals tomorrow :]

0/10

Thanks, I just spoke it the way I felt the beat inside of me though, I'll try switch that up though next time.



I always flow with the beat, check out my other songs.



Great criticism.

Nulled cause there is no "0"

theres no zero ;o

Get into it more...sound angry man...That's the vibe the words and music give me...but it isn't the vibe that your vocals give me....I hate rap but it's not bad...If you're trying to get a message out, sound like you mean it!