You guys need to work on keeping time. A lot. As well as staying consitent with your playing, I hear a lot of crickets and missed drum beats. Otherwise I found the song pretty boring and repetitive and could use better songwriting/arrangement.

Sorry if I come off as harsh, but if you sugarcoat things it will prevent you from becoming better musicians.

well thx for the critisism

Bump

You need to stick to one tempo, its decent. Practice makes perfect.

many songs change tempo, it doesn't sound bad ^^

O_<.