Really need better quality to make real comments, but yeah.

I think you're putting too much slur on your highs, so that it gets that whiny kind of fuck-me-in-the-ass accent. Try to be sharper with the highs, you don't need to go all that high either, otherwise it doesn't contrast as well.

The lows aren't as strong as they could be. They should be thicker, especially without the addition of a bass.