Pros and Cons.
Pros - It was good overall, gave me an Eminem feel, sorry for stereotyping.
Cons - Add more variation in your raping, the lyrics were good, but you don't wanna keep the same flow throughout the 1st and 2nd verse. Musical variation, raping isn't just straight out.
Good luck and I wish you the best! (:

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-JaySongs

^ Always nice to have feedback from different stand points. Thanks mate!

Yep, no problem; let me know when you release anything new.
Maybe you could listen to some of the covers I do (I haven't released any yet because I probably suck :D:D)

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-JaySongs

Yeah dude not a bad rap but you really need to autotune that girls voice...just put it on a high retune speed so she doesn't sound like t-pain

I'd rather it sound like a dying horse than use auto tune honestly. =/ Even if it's not noticeable.. that's just cheating.

Autotune = bad
but all artists use it somewhat to completely perfect the sound track.
Just a side note (:

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-JaySongs

I know that but I'm not looking to be a millionaire here hehe. My only dream is to be semi known underground. Anything more than that... I have no desire for.
btw Jay, on that youtube channel that has this one on it has a bunch of my other songs including my newest one called Blinded By The Light if you want to check them out.

For sure, I'll take a look after my finals over next week (:
Thanks for letting me know

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-JaySongs

5 day bump -- last one until the next new song