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Dec 30 2009 02:52pm
Quote (sicklad @ 14 Dec 2009 02:23)
This was made in a few minutes.
I'd like to hear it sounding like a Tool song, because I see many meaning that it can have to it.
Main one I had in mind when writing it though was how we give in to pressure and let others influence everything about us (Refresh my mind with your gravitational notions).
The last verse is about overcoming it.


We all feel like
We can't do nothin'
We all feel like
A tragedy's comin'

Through the eyes another
Through the eyes of the ones that live longer
Comin' in, like a tidal wave
Bringin' me down like I've got to change

Clear away my sanity with your potions
Refresh my mind with your gravitational notions
Feed my fire with your guilty lies
See the world through my eyes

Ferocity never looked so calm
See through your words branded in my arms
Who the hell was I to tell you otherwise
We can't deny that we're blind to lies


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iso chorus/chords to song k thx :P nice lyrics tho
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Dec 31 2009 01:20am
Quote (madeinchinars @ Dec 31 2009 07:52am)
iso chorus/chords to song k thx :P nice lyrics tho


I'm not a very good musician.
Lyrics I can do, chords and such I cannot figure out just by ear.
I play a tiny bit of guitar and a little drums.
But yeah.
Doesn't really need a chorus.
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Jan 1 2010 03:34pm
keep your work and continue to create other lyrics ;P
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