k ty for opinion

i agree the rhythmn guitar is way to loud... would love more melody and also at times i think you are trying to do to much a once for instance like 30 seconds in there is a little riffy thing and it gets pretty sloppy


but still good

ya i know what part your talkin about

i was just messin up some
when i redo this song ill make it alot better

sounds great, dont over do the producer role on final copy, the rawness makes it stand out a little more i always think. slideshow fits the song well.

what do u mean dont over do the producer role???

and ty for opinion
ty for listening

Bump

sometimes it sounds a bit sloppy so go edit it

ya i know
but it was the best one of like 6-7 that i did
i didnt feel like making it perfect lol
ill redo when i get my new program

Try adjusting the guitar volumes. Rythm was way too loud if you're having a lead in there.
Also try sometimes to switch chord progressions, it makes the song more interesting.
I know you used a mp3 player to record but try getting a DAW like reaper or audacity to mix and edit because there were some slight fingerpicking mistakes here and there.

Anyways, pretty good first song but just like I said, vary the chord progressions and make the melody more interesting sometimes.
4*

ya i just recently game of with some switchups for the melody and ill redo the song when i get my other recording stuff and program

and this wasn't my first song
i made like 10-15 songs before this one
i just decided to record this one first

ty for feedback

This post was edited by weasleface on Jun 27 2009 04:34pm