Quote (BovineDesi @ Sat, May 9 2009, 08:27pm)
I think you did a better job on the instrumental, except your rap sounds WAY too much like plain talking dude. Give it some flow, your friend's rap sounded better vocally -- lyrically, idk, imo didn't like either of ur lyrics.
I agree, lot of people who think they can rap are very monotone. Get into your flow, your zen w/e the fuck you wanna call it
and put some emotion into your rap.