I listened to the first and the third one -- your lyrics whack dude. The third one has the word fuck every other word -- cursing doesn't make your lyrics good, and if you want some real inspiration, I'd say listen to lupe or Kanye closely (they have some of the most creative lyrics i've heard, people like 50 cent are just trash compared to them) . But your beats are definitely nice, i liked the beats to all of the ones i listened to -- and yea most people here can't appreciate rap, so you won't get that many real responses.

thx and i respect your honesty i mostly do under ground rap battles or roasts so swearing doesnt matter much ive only recently started recording freestyles ill definatly take your advice and btw... if theres any rap fan that doesnt listen to kanye or lupe they dont truly like rap.

thx again

BUMP

Hopefully for more opinions

This post was edited by Zinaga on Apr 13 2009 06:35pm

I'll give you some ACTUAL feedback bro. I listen to good hip-hop and good rap. (Big L, Pun, Big, Jedi Mind Trick's and Tech to name a few)
and I have to say you lyrically just... don't have it bro. The way you rap is just unattractive to the ear's, your beat's are pretty sick though.
Try putting more emotion behind your rhymes and putting more time into your line's. Work on your punches and attack's and maybe you can get
somewhere, you just sound overly monotone at time's. Keep it up though, keep us posted.

We don't like rap in this forum.

I've heard alot of rap just from being patient with some of my friends awefull music tastes. Can't deny some of it has its originality in the world of music even if i dont like it.

All I can say about yours is, not only does it sound exactly the same as all the other fags trying to rap, but your clearly NOT a perfectionist... you sound like a "that will do guy" and are so vein you end up loving your own tracks from listening to them all day. If you want to leave mistakes in your stuff, do a video. If its a sound recording theres no room for mistakes - no exceptions.

I actually already know several people like this, and although it will never make me dislike them as people, alot get delusions of grandia just because they try and do it. Definately doesnt mean they CAN do it. I actually have 1 friend that writes 15 tracks in a day and thinks he's amazing just because he has more albums than eminem. Dunno about you but 1 track takes me at least 4 months to 5 years to complete. I simply have never uploaded any of my original material because I just dont think its good enough yet, I have too much to learn to send out some half arsed crap hoping people will praise me.

Not saying you can't, just saying you need to try much harder to get some quality in there.

Anyway, blat blat ting ting laterz bruv.

This post was edited by dysgenics on Apr 14 2009 04:23am

Why Dont You Make Some Better Music, And Read A Grammer Book And Only Capitalize The First Word Of A Sentence, And Dont Forget The Proper Nouns!

thx for some feedback i can do alot better stuff and i will show more i just had a horrible mic at the time dint feel like trying for horrible quality i just got the rest of my studio stuff in the mail today as for my lyrics that was just me trying it out im a Dj Instrumentalist for a reason