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#11
Dec 23 2008 07:44pm
nice try... but ummm i dunno... it wasnt very good.
do u guys even have a bass guitarist?
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#12
Dec 24 2008 09:23am
yea uhm
what to say X:
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#13
Dec 24 2008 02:01pm
You guys are really harsh.
There's constructive criticism then there's just flaming...
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#14
Dec 25 2008 04:48pm
I don't know how to fix this.

Maybe less powerchords.. or maybe more.

Kick your singer out.

The structure of the song is weak.

People should play guitar longer than a week before joining a band.
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#15
Dec 26 2008 03:55am
The song has so many things that should be fixed:

The main riff
Fills
Singer
The rythm, do I even have to keep listing the flaws?

Pm me if you need help with your songs...
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#16
Dec 27 2008 05:41pm
thx guys. as usual its like flames only. forums will never change but thx as said. do i have to explain or do u ppl understand. thx bye.
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#17
Dec 27 2008 11:01pm
Quote (i_ecca @ Sat, Dec 27 2008, 04:41pm)
thx guys. as usual its like flames only. forums will never change but thx as said. do i have to explain or do u ppl understand. thx bye.


bro, it doesn't matter if it's on a forum or not horrible music is horrible music.
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#18
Dec 28 2008 03:09pm
Quote (IchiTheKiller @ Sun, Dec 28 2008, 05:01am)
bro, it doesn't matter if it's on a forum or not horrible music is horrible music.


Vouch.
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#19
Dec 28 2008 03:28pm
There's nothing else to do but flame
It sucks
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#20
Dec 29 2008 11:49am
Quote (i_ecca @ Thu, Dec 18 2008, 10:24pm)
thx guys. well, we made it from scratch and its pretty cool biggrin.gif took us about 2 days to make. we know we will get better and better but as said, thx guys.

up for more serious comments ^^^^^^^^^^


That's horrible. I've written and recorded better shit than that in an hour.
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