Mostly looking for criticism on lyrics/correlation with instrumental. Commenting on sound quality not really necessary, used some vary standard shit for that.
If you're not a fan of rap/hip hop your criticism really doesn't help me.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D0aRyDbxzrU

its nice!!

Thank you!

ill listen to it again

Bump

Really nice!

I would have turned up the volume on the melody and the choir. I REALLY like the beat, howd you make it/where'd u find it?
E: lol found it..

This post was edited by Caws44 on Jun 9 2012 08:34am

Instrumentals are listed in the video details.
Thanks!

If you like my videos, please express your opinion on youtube with a like!
Uploading some more soon, maybe today.

This post was edited by young2093 on Jun 9 2012 12:58pm

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props for oil issue

Flow goes a little off beat at a point or another, and preferably I don't like the use of the word nigga in raps but that's me.
Otherwise it's good! Keep it up, and always stay positive

This post was edited by mArz on Jun 18 2012 11:14pm