Quote (monsta816 @ May 14 2010 02:38pm)
this you? I posted some shit rap/hip-hop nobody every really listens unless you are playing a quitar with no vocals at all.
its cool, needs work. vocal input needs turned down a hair it peaks a little.
edit: also I hit it with an 8 I feel it needs more punch lines.. and rhymes were a little simple.
Thanks, very constructive criticism. This is me(the vocals)...This song's lyrics were a little old, though I still felt it was a very good song so I had to re-record it into better quality then what it was at.
I will update my youtube soon, just very busy.
Thanks again though