wats good the names Dickens ppl call me Dick for short iight so listen up ya all rate my rap on a scale of 1-10 iight x/10 basically i wanna get the highest possible be sure to keep it real im turnin 49 soon so u know how it is so here goes

Yo yo yo iight listen up i spit fire so fast like in the movie fast and the furious im vicious like a lion i attack anyone that comes in my way i fight so hard u cant touch me like in the mc hammer song cant touch dis u cant hit it touch it or kick it im like a animal gotta be kept in a zoo im vicious bitch i shock you like pikachu i evolve after time like raichu yo i aint done i go all the way i aint ever done i spit till i die till my lungs colllapse wat u mutha fuckas no about kool aid i aid u mother fuckers wen u be jerkin off at night sleep with that tight dick around ur head you look like 6 mexicans with hooded breads shit im done fuckers i dont play pokemon but yes im silent and swift like a monk

iight rate this shit iight
x/10

donations are appreciated for this masterpiece yo

This post was edited by Costume on Mar 28 2009 05:42pm

1/10

Very common themes, easy rhymes, bad flow

not very original at all, i.e. vicious is overused as fuck

edit: Don't quit your dayjob.
edit2: I almost feel embarassed that you called this a masterpiece.

This post was edited by AlbinoBlackMan on Mar 28 2009 06:32pm

Is this like underground rap? Thats like the shittiest form of freestyle where you don't even have to think quick, you just blurt out random curse words. This is garbage, my suggestion is to go listen to some Kanye and Lupe, get some real lyrics. 3/10 because its supposedly freestyle.

Please do not procreate.

your turning 49 soon?

This post was edited by dysgenics on Mar 29 2009 03:46am

sorry.. cant stop laughing

how is this even freestyle when its written down?

This post was edited by dysgenics on Mar 29 2009 03:47am

10/10

nice

rofl

you should have put it in line form so its easier to read not a mini wall o text

and should have recorded it as i have no frame of reference as to how it sounds, and lastly

the jokers dimension is where you should have posted this

This post was edited by (+H0L1c+) on Mar 29 2009 01:05pm