Give me some Criticism. Just no flaming please.


It's a work in progress . And I'm still tring to learn how to make vocals better, So yeah.

www.myspace.com/showmecold.

Too slow for my liking..... Screaming wasn't so good, it was so quite and incomprehensible. C-

You didn't like the non-vocal techno songs?

The first song that plays was just a test.

Not into techno Closest thing to techno I get is MSI.

Your background music is really great. But your screaming, not to sound mean, is horrid. You need to work on tone and pitch control, as well as just sustained control. It sounds like you're just doing it in spurts and not giving your voice real depth. Relax your vocal cords before trying to do your gutterals/inhales/whatever-those-ares. My advice? Stick with making the house music and ditch the vocals. You would probably do very well, assuming you made the background music.

lol @ sreaming instructions

i quite liked the tunes, but i expected a faster drum beat to come in
sounds cool though
but (not a godlike musician so dont qoute me on this) if this is supposed to be dance music, maybe a lil bit more tempo??



still, i quite liked it

Why "lol" exactly? I've been in a few metal bands, and my best friend that lived in my house for three months does inhales and gutterals, and he's moved throughout all of the genres. Hardcore (real Hardcore, such as Irate NYC), to inhales (Lamb of God-esque), to shit-tastic gutterals (Cannibal Corpse), to black metal *cringe* (Dimmu Borgir-esque), and now he's back to inhales (thank god). I hate to tell you, but there are such things as pitch, tone, depth, and sustain in singing such as that, and if you don't realize that, then I'm sorry.

yeah srsly, I lol at idiots who think doing death growls is easy.


why "shit-tastic" gutturals and "cringe" bm though? Death Metal and Black Metal have the 2 best vocal styles.


Fuck the hardcore "tough guy" vocals they're stupid as hell.

Lamb of God style inhales..... meh, I prefer the classic death growl.

Lamb of God sounds terrible.