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May 28 2013 06:58am
https://soundcloud.com/tjuffe/tjuffe-calling-for-future



i really need u guys to help me get better so let it all out!


ofc if u dont like psytrance plz dont post comments about the gener
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May 28 2013 08:51am
U need better samples, for like 5mim at start and end u got same boring sample that dosent even sound psy goin on and on.. Breakdowns are bland, and give no punch for what i guess should be fullon song.. 4-5min part is good but rest needs work.
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May 28 2013 12:30pm
Quote (SmartassHr @ May 28 2013 03:51pm)
U need better samples, for like 5mim at start and end u got same boring sample that dosent even sound psy goin on and on.. Breakdowns are bland, and give no punch for what i guess should be fullon song.. 4-5min part is good but rest needs work.


shit i make all my samples my self so to hear that hurt me deep down... but thanks for the input .... I guess
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May 28 2013 02:37pm
You should ask here http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=39210767&f=186&o=2060

And well imo its not bad but it clearly need to be improved
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May 28 2013 08:08pm
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