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Feb 20 2010 07:37am
Quote (AlanKeyes @ Feb 19 2010 10:33pm)
Why you usin' big words
Only making you look like one of those nerds
Half the shit you spit ain't even legit
Come around here you get hit, you get split, you get slit
It's dangerous and you're unfit to play your game
It'd be a shame to end your life on this friday night
Stop with the crap or you're never gonna see the daylight
My mind has been dazed
My words have been praised
But nigga i'm still unfazed


you can call me a nerd, but ill run you soon
one more thing you cant even flow on tune
my flows is rare, and yours is like a common raccoon
step to me and go missing til the next phase of the moon
my spits legit, maybe you should have a go at it
after this, ill emit, suicide for you to commit
cause you just got wrecked by the thotful wit
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Feb 20 2010 07:50am
I'm afraid you're 3 months late :(

http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=38147130&f=135

This post was edited by Edyrem on Feb 20 2010 07:51am
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Feb 20 2010 07:54am
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damn, thanks for that
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Feb 20 2010 08:00am
Quote (Big_Red123 @ Feb 20 2010 04:54pm)
damn, thanks for that


Welcome to joker's dimension...

B)

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Quote (Edyrem @ Feb 20 2010 09:00am)
Welcome to joker's dimension...

B)


oh shit lmao
you got me -_-
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Feb 20 2010 09:57am
Quote (Big_Red123 @ Feb 20 2010 09:37am)
you can call me a nerd, but ill run you soon
one more thing you cant even flow on tune
my flows is rare, and yours is like a common raccoon
step to me and go missing til the next phase of the moon
my spits legit, maybe you should have a go at it
after this, ill emit, suicide for you to commit
cause you just got wrecked by the thotful wit


That shit is whack
Sounds like some nigger soundtrack
These lines are on the attack
Leave your ass on the track
Like some dirty wetback
Come tomorrow you'll be in the pitch black
All you can see are these flash backs
Your flow lacks rhythm
My skill is gruesome
Get your nigger ass back to harlem
You don't want a problem with me
Mentally, I'm the best there can be.
Your flows are desultory
I'll physically or psychologically destroy you with my army of words
Turn you into one of my herds
Now you're a real nigger and you ain't any bigger.

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Feb 20 2010 10:20am
Quote (AlanKeyes @ Feb 20 2010 10:57am)
That shit is whack
Sounds like some nigger soundtrack
These lines are on the attack
Leave your ass on the track
Like some dirty wetback
Come tomorrow you'll be in the pitch black
All you can see are these flash backs
Your flow lacks rhythm
My skill is gruesome
Get your nigger ass back to harlem
You don't want a problem with me
Mentally, I'm the best there can be.
Your flows are desultory
I'll physically or psychologically destroy you with my army of words
Turn you into one of my herds
Now you're a real nigger and you ain't any bigger.


might be a nigger soundtrack, but think back
who created this shit that you call wack?
you talk about murders, and homicides
but fuck a restraining order, for me you wanted a continental divide
my styles is oversupplied, you need to improvise
your lines, underlie mines
so think back and revise, cause it wouldnt be wise to try to defy
cause flows i provide, you need to up size
so take notes, cause your rap game is demise.
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Feb 21 2010 04:15am
Quote (Big_Red123 @ Feb 20 2010 07:20pm)
might be a nigger soundtrack, but think back
who created this shit that you call wack?
you talk about murders, and homicides
but fuck a restraining order, for me you wanted a continental divide
my styles is oversupplied, you need to improvise
your lines, underlie mines
so think back and revise, cause it wouldnt be wise to try to defy
cause  flows i provide, you need to up size
so take notes, cause your rap game is demise.


I gotta give it to the big red here,
This time his rhymes persevere,
But you all got nothing on me,
Cause my rhymes are free,
I'm always at the top of the tree,
Defying earth's physics like a killer bee,
Just admit that I'm the winner to be,
Because I am the one and only EM CEE.

Now the calvary has come, to your surprise
This reinforcement is the newfags' demise

You need to know not to mess with Edyrem, here
Otherwise the thread will take the Edyrem steer

And shit is just gonna tumble on your asses
Verbally humiliating you before the masses

This post was edited by Edyrem on Feb 21 2010 04:20am
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Feb 21 2010 04:44am
Quote (Edyrem @ Feb 21 2010 06:15am)
I gotta give it to the big red here,
This time his rhymes persevere,
But you all got nothing on me,
Cause my rhymes are free,
I'm always at the top of the tree,
Defying earth's physics like a killer bee,
Just admit that I'm the winner to be,
Because I am the one and only EM CEE.

Now the calvary has come, to your surprise
This reinforcement is the newfags' demise

You need to know not to mess with Edyrem, here
Otherwise the thread will take the Edyrem steer

And shit is just gonna tumble on your asses
Verbally humiliating you before the masses


You can't rap
You can't freestyle
Your lines are a piece of crap
You're as meaningless as a gentile to moses
Your flow has been reviled
Your vocabulary lacks style
Your attacks sound senile
Damn right this verse has been all about you
But don't think you're worthwhile
Because my flow is a breakthrough
My lines leave you bestrew
The vocabulary I ensue is just a preview
This is only the start to my debut
My attacks subdue hebrew to worship me as their new guru
Please, stop verbally humilating me
Before my new boundary turns deadly
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Feb 21 2010 05:03am
Drop that shit Alan :wub:

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