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Mar 12 2011 03:53am
Bump for more opinions ^_^
Also, like my FB page to hear a 30 second clip of my new, faster, unmastered rap song I'm doing.


www.facebook.com/icepick513

This post was edited by XLordxInfamousX on Mar 12 2011 03:54am
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Just recently released my mixtape through my facebook. Waiting on datpiff to clear my account to upload. For now it's on megaupload.
Go to my page (http://www.facebook.com/icepick513) and check out the mixtape tab. I'm open to all constructive criticism, just don't be an ass and we'll be cool ^_^
Recorded all on my laptop mic, so not the best quality audio, but for my second production, not HORRIBLE, I think >.<;
A couple are more...eh, hell I'll say it, shitty. But ya win some, ya lose some XD

Thanks guys ^_^
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Apr 15 2011 08:12pm
gg raps, keep em coming
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Apr 15 2011 09:08pm
Quote (D2Pro71 @ Apr 15 2011 10:12pm)
gg raps, keep em coming


Thanks bro, glad you like'm.
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May 10 2011 04:04pm
Just released one of the songs from my mixtape onto my Youtube



Like me on Facebook (www.facebook.com/icepick513)

Always down for feedback and constructive criticism.

Thanks guys ^_^
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Jul 9 2011 03:51am
Just covered Drake's new song Marvin's Room
>.<; It sounds funny on Youtube, but figured I'd post it here for you guys ^_^

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Jul 17 2011 01:07am
GET THIS MAN SOME LIKES ON HIS FACE BOOK.
keep the raps coming bro.
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Jul 17 2011 07:09pm
only problem i see from listening is this

when you rap slow as some of the other said you need to drop heavy lines something that people will remember and are deep



this is a example of someone who isn't rapping fast who drops heavy lines.

"atlas walking through the projects with the hood on my shoulders"

it's the kind of lyrics that even though you might not want to bump your head with it your going to appracaite the lyrics

keep making more though man you got potential for sure :)
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Jul 17 2011 10:58pm
Quote (Ensane @ Jul 17 2011 09:09pm)
only problem i see from listening is this

when you rap slow as some of the other said you need to drop heavy lines something that people will remember and are deep

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pXtQE-MhY5k

this is a example of someone who isn't rapping fast who drops heavy lines.

"atlas walking through the projects with the hood on my shoulders"

it's the kind of lyrics that even though you might not want to bump your head with it your going to appracaite the lyrics

keep making more though man you got potential for sure :)


Thanks a ton man ^_^ :thumbsup: Much appreciated.
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Aug 1 2011 08:16pm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LYeIdUIpzFo

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