The lyrical content is pretty main stream and PC for a punk band.

I think there's a ton of room for improvement on all aspects of it.

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ne suggestions?

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It decent but please make lyrics on tempo is all I ask. Made the song weird

Yeah i agree on this. I found the lyrics didnt really make any sense, not consistent.

It wasnt bad, i like some of Offspring/ Sum 41's tracks, not exactly going to get world famous with this music though, its kind of dead.

Also the solo was way to slow compared to the rest of the song.

Dead eh? Considering it was born in NYC in the early 70's I'd say it's rather alive if 14yr old morons are aware of it.

But on topic, sound isn't bad really, but the lyrics don't fit with the sound at all. And the vocals are flat a lot of the time. I suggest less emotional themes for lyrics and more snarl in the vocals. Keep it up though.