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Mar 8 2011 07:53pm
Quote (XXmarcXX @ Mar 8 2011 08:49pm)
im not sayn it has to be fast

but your not even on beat... you should of least went accapella

i dont mind slow rapping but if your going that slow and i cant even jam to beat im just waiting for lyrics

so i would like to hear some nice lines if i cant even nod my head to it

but at least your rapping man keep doin ur thing


Thanks bro
Like I said, it's all off computer mic with free recording software, I'm looking into a studio here by my college to try and get sound better. Because that is definitely half the battle
And my beats are low quality cuz I just get them from Youtube XD
I'll try and pack my lyrics with more wit, thanks for the feedback
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Mar 8 2011 11:43pm
tl;dr
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tl;dr


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Mar 9 2011 10:11am
Its not bad, its definately not amazing tohugh.
Like other people said, you definately go too slow with your raps.
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Quote (XLordxInfamousX @ Mar 9 2011 03:40am)
I mean, the rap is more hip-hop style tempo


? do you even know the definiton of hip-hop ?
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Mar 9 2011 10:42am
haters gonna hate.... but keep doing your thing.
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Mar 9 2011 10:58am
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haters gonna hate.... but keep doing your thing.


Not hating, he asked for opinions, and people are giving him honest opinions.
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Mar 9 2011 11:36am
Quote (impulse155 @ Mar 9 2011 11:11am)
Its not bad, its definately not amazing tohugh.
Like other people said, you definately go too slow with your raps.


My newer ones, ones I'm saving to release with my mixtape, are a bit faster.
Thanks for the feedback though, appreciated, for sure.

Quote (HeLiCaL @ Mar 9 2011 11:35am)
? do you even know the definiton of hip-hop ?


Yeah, hip-hop uses 70-110 tempo, respectively. Thanks.

Quote (SwollenTech @ Mar 9 2011 11:42am)
haters gonna hate.... but keep doing your thing.


XD Eh, like in my original post, not worried about people hating on it, it's a rough start to music, so I'm open to criticism

Quote (impulse155 @ Mar 9 2011 11:58am)
Not hating, he asked for opinions, and people are giving him honest opinions.


And this ^_^
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Mar 10 2011 09:18am
I forgot about an earlier track I did, it's on my Myspace, probably near the bottom of the playlist titled "On the Fast Track" (www.myspace.com/icepick513)
It was a pretty lyrically weak, but a faster flow than the other stuff on my Youtube. I'll be releasing a new single on their soon, and I'll post the video up when I do.
I appreciate the feedback and constructive criticism guys, really. It's hard to get anything real these days, keep it coming.

This is another one of my raps, I mean, the original is better, so not really iso those comments XD
But this is what I put together in one night of writing, recording, and revising. Lmk




This post was edited by XLordxInfamousX on Mar 10 2011 09:26am
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I don't know if any of you have heard of Ronald Jenkees, but I will be doing at least one track over one of his songs from each of his albums. ^_^
His instrumentals are intense
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