You should work on your singing, also the effects on the singing part sounds pretty crappy. Rapping parts sound better, you have clearly spent more time on learning how to use your voice in raps than singing. Rhymes sound pretty basic and i dont hear any clever puns like: "...But I'll smile with a gun in my hand, I'm trigger happy". Beat is not bad, but isnt anything special either.
This post was edited by Antichrist- on Aug 27 2014 04:14am