intros a bit too long and the way you say headhunters in the intro makes it seem like you have downs syndrome
be more aggressive with your lines from 0:30 to 1:00
after 1:00 you start to rap more clearly and aggressive, but everything before that is way too passive.
overall pretty good
"breaking legs and breaking spines" ...we goin head huntin.
should be " BREAKING LEGS AND BREAKING SPINES" WE GOIN HEADDD HUNTINN
has alot of potential.