ok ok now now the final round//
i wasn't even plannen on going again against this clown//
the reason i mentioned you mom putten you down//
is cause i thought you'd wanna know she's sleepen around//
i didn't wanna go this low but your rhymes are weak as fuck//
i can eat you up so many ways u remind me of reesse cups//
i wasnt gonna tell people about the battle but its leaken up//
speakin of, theres already spammers tryen to beat u up//
and almost everything i said had some sorta rhymes//
say it aloud? i think your the one thats snorten lines//
since im killen you so bad right now, why stop?
you remind me of the type of kids wit high tops and that lie alot//
who cares if i used the word it so many times?//
i changed up the word before it in every line//
that's somethin called word play, pay attention to what my verse say//
and maybe you'll grow to a good emce not now but someday//

that was weak compared to the last 2 verses but w/e thats the end of the rounds

In the words of KJ52....

"is that a life with out Christ is still a life that is never fixed
ill tell you this even if its a hard pill to swallow
like it or not guys your gonna always be a roll model
do you know these kids were the ones they always follow
what we say and how we live gives them a better tomorrow
iv had my share of some plus man iv been rejected
iv been chewed up spit out and cussed disrespected
but if i die to day and never sale another record
Jesus gave me more than i ever could of been expected
i know life is hectic it can leave you blowin away
but check it bro cause we just gonna die someday
and on that note well theres only one thing still left to say
theres still one love and one god and only one way"

Cursing won't save you in or out of your rhymes guys...
I would rap this for yall but, I dont know where to start rofl...

i never thought it would help, it's just a bad habbit when i get in the zone.

Amusing, he rapped this for Emenim, in Dear Slim Part2. If you'd like to hear him rap this It sounds alot better if he rapped it, then it being written...

i gotta go with element104954 cause i think he did a better job of dissing him

it was a very hard choice i jus liked elements' a bit better, very very close though

This post was edited by WS-NaturesRage on Sep 2 2008 07:15pm

Round 1 - element104954
Round 2 - Epiphany


Round 3 For the win ( Very close took quite awhile to choose.)

Epiphany

Sorry Element I found yours very good but you have a problem with over wording and choosing words that don't quite flow.

I'm not saying that epiphany was perfect because his 1st verse sucked hard dick imo and on the second it was very close, He just took the win by a little bit in my book.

So, Congratulations to Epiphany and to Element, I believe you can do better because 1st and second verses were fantastic.


Adding: Rap much like poetry doesn't have to Rhyme as long as it makes sense.

This post was edited by Gait on Sep 2 2008 07:20pm

i feel the same way i have it different though

i think that element although at times didnt flow enough he dissed him more and thats wat this was rly about

I agree that he dissed more, but part of the rap is flowing and making sense and honestly a few times I didn't see flow in elements piece.

Kk I'm going spit something up just for fun, so don't critisize me, I'm not here for critisizm... just compliments...

Jesus died for our sins
To free us from the devils din.
Jesus will never turn back...
No matter how hard we fight back...
Don't let the devil crack us up,
smack us up, or jack us up...
We need to pack him up, tack him up.
Cursing just a sin, that Jesus died for,
A sin that god tore...
from your soul,
God is in control.

I'm done.
Though would like yall to read these from KJ52...

"If even everyone you know
just up and goes away
he'll still love you till the very day
that your of that old and gray
to bad alot of Christians all they do is hate on you
instead of dropen it there knees
and taken time to pray for you
its ovious that you really love your daughter dude
for that i gota tell you well i really got respect for you
so here it is dear slim chapter part 2
another cat trying to make it just like you"

and don't forget guys. (im not trying to change anyone's desicion) but when someone write down a verse.. it can flow extremely well out loud which is what i was tryen to explain in one oof the verses even if online it doesnt seem like it does. like multis for exmaple, weak as fuck and reessee cups ryhmes out loud but doesn't look like it does online. idk just something to think about. it's also called a multi, more technique when you do it that way rather than dr. suess lines like day play hey etc.