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#11
Sep 2 2008 02:42pm
Quote (Callofcombat @ Tue, 2 Sep 2008, 16:39)
Haha that was just as good smile.gif


Thanks. smile.gif that's my round 2 verse we'll stop at this one or do 3 rounds if it's a tie. We'll figure it out, just waiting on his round 2 verse.
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#12
Sep 2 2008 05:59pm
Quote (element104954 @ Tue, Sep 2 2008, 03:44pm)

if i sold my soul to the devil id leave em' in debt//


yea yea....
speakin'a debt...

folks lost a job, im payin' for almost every meal
no hustlin', not a single drug deal
these words comin' out, are nothin' but real
I'll get these meals, even if i gotta fuckin' steal
lets be real, my lifes pretty messed up - without regret
but who are you to say you'd leave the devil in the debt
when the devil asks me its not credit or debit, its
"i'll write a check"
and yea its true, i got fat stacks, that you will never get
its hard, livin', supporting your family
but i got more fans then you will ever see
more rap skills, a better rapper, then you will ever be
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#13
Sep 2 2008 06:17pm
the only reason you even won the first round is cause it wasnt even about you//
if my first verse was about you people would immediatley doubt you//
its funny how im rippen you up goin explicit as fuck//
but why am i wasten my energy on a kid that sucks//
it's because of me in this rap game im liften you up//
if it wasnt for me you prolly would just give up//
you had all night to type that wit no punchlines behind it//
i tore you apart in 5 minutes and had no time to revise it//
you think you're real good but I have no time for your lies kid//
if your gay, that's okay, there's no reason to hide it//
just open the door to your closet stop hiden behind it//
im the reason your mom gave birth to a half brother i hope you dont mind it//
and yo this is a battle between me and you not me and your family//
your mom has a hard life? i think otherwise wit the letters she be mailen me//
and if you have such fat stacks then it shouldnt be a problem to support that fat ass//
who you call a sad dad so next time ask yourself who your mad at//
before you vent to me like im a rent-a-shrink in a battle when ure supposed to be dissen me//
listen g my rhymes get more donations then a damn christening// (church related thing idk if i spelled that right)
i spit so much fire my mouth is as bright as a christmas tree//
i really hope your listening, you should take notes so you have a better chance against me
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#14
Sep 2 2008 06:30pm
Quote (element104954 @ Mon, Sep 1 2008, 01:29am)
This thread was thought of my me and epiphany. Also approved by Balakai.

This thread will be up and bumped frequesntly by us with new verses. (rap ofc)

Depending on how active it gets we may keep doing it or just stop it. Bad criticism will stay within PM's and not in thread to avoid e-drama..
You can rap about the last verse you see or just make one completley up off the top of your head.. it don't matter just keep it appropriate as possible.

If you're going to write a verse make it at least 8 bars and no more than 16 please. If you're going to criticize any work please make it constructive criticism rather than just saying you suck.. wink.gif

starting verse~


Don't give a F*** straight up tell you your rap is off//
your lacken thoughts but your rap ain't wack it's soft//
maybe if you got your face away from your macantosh//
you'd be more lyrically cultured and have a track that's strong//
if you're slacken off and hacken songs then you shouldn't rap at all//
when someone starts lacken all i just try and laugh it off//
cause there's nuthin i can do but bash his songs//
you can say your the best but when I'm around the fact is gone//
cause im cracken jaws the way i keep stacken songs//
and if my jab across will leave you back across//
all your tracks and songs like the collab wit ross//
then i have a right to be flashen off everything that crackhead bought//
the second i start backen off and start macken broads//
im gonna kill any beat that falls on my lap thats raw//
if i spit and you don't like the rap you saw then i wont rap at all//
cause raps not rap at all if my gat is drawn to shoot till' your back is gone

-- have fun!


thats weak















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#15
Sep 2 2008 06:34pm
Quote (HEIDTB @ Tue, 2 Sep 2008, 20:30)
thats weak

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south north compton NY houston escalade money weed pimp


That was just some random crap i had to start things off.. how about you read the actual battle and say im week again lol
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#16
Sep 2 2008 06:36pm
Quote (element104954 @ Wed, Sep 3 2008, 12:34am)
That was just some random crap i had to start things off.. how about you read the actual battle and say im week again lol


u leaving yo?
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#17
Sep 2 2008 06:38pm
Half the shit in your lines, didn't even rhyme.
I didn't use all night, i took about half of your time
and i think your lookin' out from the other side
your the one in the closet, im not hidin' behind
and why you have to crack gay jokes, its a bad habbit
there are a lot of people that are gay,
but you're the faggot
crappy cracks, just like when the magicians pulls out the rabbit

so then you go and make jokes about my mom
that shits wrong, you dissin' yourself, have you seen my mom?
thats right, i used mom at the end of two lines
you used the word "it" a thousand times,
lyrical shit, flowin through you're veins like you snorted a line
but my rhymes aren't a crime, they're prime
you rap for shits and giggles, i rap to stay alive

people say rap, is retards attempting poetry
how can you judge someone,
you don't know anything about me
and how could you make people doubt me
you're sayin the same things in every rap
why don't you tell people somethin' they don't know about me
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#18
Sep 2 2008 06:40pm
rap is gay
more gay then stacking hay
i could lay down by the bay
who knows i just may.
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#19
Sep 2 2008 06:50pm
Quote (Epiphany @ Tue, Sep 2 2008, 06:38pm)
Half the shit in your lines, didn't even rhyme.
I didn't use all night, i took about half of your time
and i think your lookin' out from the other side
your the one in the closet, im not hidin' behind
and why you have to crack gay jokes, its a bad habbit
there are a lot of people that are gay,
but you're the faggot
crappy cracks, just like when the magicians pulls out the rabbit

so then you go and make jokes about my mom
that shits wrong, you dissin' yourself, have you seen my mom?
thats right, i used mom at the end of two lines
you used the word "it" a thousand times,
lyrical shit, flowin through you're veins like you snorted a line
but my rhymes aren't  a crime, they're prime
you rap for shits and giggles, i rap to stay alive

people say rap, is retards attempting poetry
how can you judge someone,
you don't know anything about me
and how could you make people doubt me
you're sayin the same things in every rap
why don't you tell people somethin' they don't know about me


While I sit here in sorrow poppin my ecstasy///
Thinking about my past catching up to me///
Why won't this fear just rip out of me///
waiting at home for something to change///
why wont this world go out with a bang//
Instead of my life, my change going down the drain///
I sit here and cry in pain///
why did everything go this way///
Is it choices fear maybe today//
I'll quit this shit and stop be astray///
With my family and friends worrying about me today///
maybe today i'll say///
Fuck this pipe i'm going the right way///
That was so bad lol I guess i'll stick to poems

This post was edited by Belldandy on Sep 2 2008 06:51pm
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#20
Sep 2 2008 06:52pm
Quote (Naota @ Tue, 2 Sep 2008, 19:40)
rap is gay
more gay then stacking hay
i could lay down by the bay
who knows i just may.


rofl, that was lame.
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