This thread was thought of my me and epiphany. Also approved by Balakai.

This thread will be up and bumped frequesntly by us with new verses. (rap ofc)

Depending on how active it gets we may keep doing it or just stop it. Bad criticism will stay within PM's and not in thread to avoid e-drama..
You can rap about the last verse you see or just make one completley up off the top of your head.. it don't matter just keep it appropriate as possible.

If you're going to write a verse make it at least 8 bars and no more than 16 please. If you're going to criticize any work please make it constructive criticism rather than just saying you suck..

starting verse~


Don't give a F*** straight up tell you your rap is off//
your lacken thoughts but your rap ain't wack it's soft//
maybe if you got your face away from your macantosh//
you'd be more lyrically cultured and have a track that's strong//
if you're slacken off and hacken songs then you shouldn't rap at all//
when someone starts lacken all i just try and laugh it off//
cause there's nuthin i can do but bash his songs//
you can say your the best but when I'm around the fact is gone//
cause im cracken jaws the way i keep stacken songs//
and if my jab across will leave you back across//
all your tracks and songs like the collab wit ross//
then i have a right to be flashen off everything that crackhead bought//
the second i start backen off and start macken broads//
im gonna kill any beat that falls on my lap thats raw//
if i spit and you don't like the rap you saw then i wont rap at all//
cause raps not rap at all if my gat is drawn to shoot till' your back is gone

-- have fun!

gay

You can at least try to do better if you're gonna flame me.

Retards
Attempting
Poetry


You just failed.

you did for bringing that joke back from the 90's

If my back is gone - ill school your ass sittin' down
don't frown, because these haters are puttin' you down
i'm a royal rapper, cant you see my scepter and crown
my lyrical flow's so crazy it beats yours and i dont have to even say a sound
write any lyrics down
blast from the past, shooting you with a thousand rounds
put your face to the ground, and then stomp on your head
yo, yo yo, did you hear what i said?
bam, how does it feel to be dead?

^Awesome.

I see we're not obeying the rules to 8-16 bars, that's only 4 bars so this time I won't waste much time.

I didn't expect my own guildy to reply to my lines//
so get outa here wit them dumbass lulaby rhymes//
yea i slept with ure mom but your still no son of mine guy//
by the looks of your picture you never dealt wit guns n knives why?//
I love how you came on here wit time to doctor it up//
he can say your awsome but i hate soccer whats up?//
and next time add in some multis at least try to insult me//
you're not even on my level yet so much for bein my homie//
oh yea and whats all this talk about me bein dead//
if i sold my soul to the devil id leave em' in debt//

There's 6 for ya.

Haha that was just as good