Plop, j'ai un devoirs à rendre demain 13h, il s'agit de faire un dialogue entre un policier et un gamin, je l'ai fait mais bon j'ai fait beaucoup de fautes (mauvais niveau d'anglais inside
+ fatigue) donc si quelqu'un a le temps de s'y pencher dans la nuit/demain matin ce serait parfait sinon bah tant pis j'rendrai comme ça
. Merci
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The scene takes place in a restaurant where a kid, with a bundle, is sitting next to a policeman. The policeman, who is intrigued, asks a few questions to the little boy to learn what
(is) happen
ed(ing) and why he is here.
“Hi, I’m
the (rien) Sheriff Palson.” The policeman said kindly. “What a kid like you
are (is) doing here alone, are you lost?”
“Get lost; I am alone because I decided to be alone!” The kid answered coldly.
“Well, well.” The policeman continued. “I just want to know what are you doing here without your parents, who are they?”
“I’ve seceded from my family because my parents were too much authoritative.” The young boy explained. “But don’t worry, I’m resourceful and I’ll
can (be able to) fend for myself” He insured without any hesitation.
“No doubt subsists, but I have to go back to your home with you, your parents are probably looking for you everywhere in the town!” The Sheriff said quietly.
“But, please, Sheriff.” He whined. “I don’t want to go home where I’m just an eight years
(old) young boy, I want to
make many trips (travel) all around the world”.
“It’s a good idea but this ain’t for you
(r) age, you have to grow
(up) a little
(bit more before) to hope(hoping) to secede from your family, you’re too young” He replied calmly.
“You’re wrong! My bag is ready; I have got all the supplies which can be used during this trip. I took warm clothes and sandwiches” He answered determined.
“Well young boy” M. Palson said drily. “It’s my job, I must drive you to your home, and I can’t let you there”. He stared the kid and asked with a straight face “Where do your parents live?”
“5528 West 69th street, Overkland Park” He grizzled.
At the end the kid came back to his home with his parents who were very worried about their son’s health.
P.S : J'ai posté dans la section approprié aussi :
http://forums.d2jsp.org/index.php?showtopic=29118740&f=257&st=0#entry178254692.
J'ai mis en bold ce que j'aurais changé et entre parenthèses ce que j'aurais mis, après faut revérifier car je suis pas sur.