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Oct 21 2011 03:29pm
http://soundcloud.com/rush-pfeiffer/love-along-a-road

It's a song that was inspired by the "Love your neighbor as yourself" parable that Jesus told.

Tell me what ya think, and pay close attention to the lyrics.
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Oct 21 2011 06:02pm
You used a lot of reverb again. :( I liked this song, will listen again later more closely. Would love to hear more, with less or no reverb. :) You don't need it to cover anything up, so don't be afraid to try some final mixes without it. :)
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Oct 21 2011 06:49pm
Quote (njaguar @ Oct 21 2011 08:02pm)
You used a lot of reverb again. :( I liked this song, will listen again later more closely. Would love to hear more, with less or no reverb. :) You don't need it to cover anything up, so don't be afraid to try some final mixes without it. :)


I thought the reverb was a nice touch :(

It really isn't that much. But I'll see what I can do with less.
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Oct 22 2011 08:26am
Ok fixed a couple things in the mix.
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Oct 22 2011 08:43am
Sounds a lot better now :) You might also want to consider lowering the volume on the xylophone instrument, it dominates a bit too much in spots, but otherwise, sounding pretty good!
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Oct 22 2011 08:53am
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Sounds a lot better now :) You might also want to consider lowering the volume on the xylophone instrument, it dominates a bit too much in spots, but otherwise, sounding pretty good!


you mean the bells or the synth?

And incase you guys didn't know. The 2nd string instrument in the 2nd chorus is a mandolin not guitar.

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you mean the bells or the synth?

And incase you guys didn't know. The 2nd string instrument in the 2nd chorus is a mandolin not guitar.


The bells, sorry, sounded like a xylophone :)
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Oct 23 2011 10:09am
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http://soundcloud.com/rush-pfeiffer/love-along-a-road

It's a song that was inspired by the "Love your neighbor as yourself" parable that Jesus told.

Tell me what ya think, and pay close attention to the lyrics.


very nice :)
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Oct 23 2011 05:14pm
You did a very good job on the music. :thumbsup:
Did you play all of the instruments in that song?


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You did a very good job on the music. :thumbsup:
Did you play all of the instruments in that song?


Ya I do all the intruments and voices in my songs.
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