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Quote (Improv @ Jul 25 2012 10:13am)
http://i.imgur.com/zbmor.jpg
not sure about text. I put in jap version for komamura
I actually like that Jap text on there

But I don't care for the font Austin is in
Also saddly i'm not feeling that landscape maybe try a different one, something with more life to it, not just a dark forest. (Sorry I know I said forest up there, but didn't mean like a dark forest.)

Quote (Super Emerican @ Jul 25 2012 10:36am)
http://i.imgur.com/ecmJE.jpg
The building flows nice but the text, the render and the rest doesn't, maybe try to add some things to it.
Thanks for the attempts, by all means edit or try again I appericate it.
This post was edited by Austin on Jul 25 2012 11:58pm