It seems like a decent start, but seems a bit... monochromatic? Is that the word for single color?



Replied to in my other topic.



It's almost a little too colorful and flowery I think. I think the render may just be bad, but I think everyone's going with the whole flower theme and over-doing it.



It's a bit dark, like it's hard to tell that my specific render was chosen, almost like it could work with any other render ya know?

Monochromatic? Np.

First one:



Tbh I don't like the font rly. I also used a custom shapes, but I think that chinese sings would be nicer than it.
Maybe you would like it.

Second one:



I don't really knew what I can add to the left side of the sig.
So i added there a small "button" with "P". I think that it looks nice.

I added coloured border because black/white looks bad..

This post was edited by Lucas on Oct 22 2010 04:13am

know what u mean

gl with ur iso!

edit: I just wanna try lighten it up, add some roses, maybe u like that

This post was edited by mmn91 on Oct 22 2010 09:08am

lighten up version + some flowers

vs old

lmk

Haha well here's my attempt...



Don't really know where I was going with this one, jsut messin around lmk what you think please! Can make changes

This post was edited by zardd on Oct 22 2010 01:33pm

starting one

Version 2:

trying something a little different.

I like the shapes better actually, but I mean if you can do some sort of Japanese symbols where you know what it means instead of just throwing it in there because it looks nice...

Not too bad though, I think it's my favorite thus far.



A bit better, but my main issue is more that you can't really tell it's the render I picked. You can tell it's Haruhi, but it could be her in any render



A bit simplistic and it kinda blends together, maybe make the background a bit easier to distinguish?



She's too small for me, and it kinda looks like the second one is better than your first attempt, though it's still not quite what I'm looking for. I'm not sure if it's just she's too small or it just looks liek she's misplaced somehow.



It's a cute idea, but I just don't think it works for this render, maybe if there were more colors to work with, it'd flow better, but they all kind of just mash together.