eye cancer but thanks for the attempt

/also new renders added

and i'd prefer if people attempt at the really cute looking renders first

This post was edited by Mutant on Dec 7 2010 04:48pm

So, I took out some stuff on the left and lightened it up; let me know if this is better, worse, or not what you wanted. It seems a little empty on the left to me, I could possibly crop out a few pixels of the negative space if you wanted.

Oh, and another idea I was working on earlier. (Sorry, did it way before you said to attempt really cute renders first ... though CC is ALWAYS cute :P)



This post was edited by SaffasMissionary on Dec 7 2010 04:52pm

Really bright and shiny. Going for a more neutral color scheme at least in my mind.



Looks better almost like she's falling in space now. But maybe line you said a bit too empty now. Maybe see if you can fill it with something? A cheap favorite trick of mind was like to place the render in a bit oversized flip it and make it nearly transparent so it's hard to notice but if it accentuates the flow it works really well


As for the second one, hm. I have my opinions but I think he needs to give opinions too seeing as he's the one paying... I'll post my thoughts on it afterwards.

no real opinions on first one
ill buy only if princess likes

second one could use more color
maybe make it alittle darker

Not a problem. Was going for a bright, semi-washed-out feel, but here it is without.

ill get back to this one soon
i wanna see more attempts at others first

how long will this be running? because i'm kind of busy now but might get to attempting on the weekend



lol kk failed to notice the topic descrip

This post was edited by theOHMS on Dec 7 2010 05:51pm

until i get 100 signatures

i got

e: i can draw girl

This post was edited by FSW on Dec 7 2010 06:19pm

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