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Nov 16 2021 06:53pm
Mind you ive stooped to using Gimp as im running Linux now.


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Nov 17 2021 06:54am
the blurred spots on the right look kinda weird. what was your intention with those?
some of the yellow/orange spots are unnecessary imo like the two on the far left and the one on his collar
the C doesnt fit at all, neither in place nor style
i feel like the render stands out a lot but that was probably what you wanted
i know that was a boat load of negative stuff but i can see that you know what youre doing and the tag looks pretty decent overall, surely better than what i put out. i just have a hard time picking out positives :ph34r:
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Nov 17 2021 01:44pm
kinda neat, but the blurs make it feel too chaotic, like everything besides the render is almost blurring together
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Nov 17 2021 02:32pm
Quote (Ctrlaltkick @ Nov 17 2021 12:53am)
Mind you ive stooped to using Gimp as im running Linux now.


https://i.imgur.com/zvh7mB6.png


nothing wrong with gimp, 95% of my stuff is done with gimp
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Quote (rinirax @ 17 Nov 2021 07:54)
the blurred spots on the right look kinda weird. what was your intention with those?
some of the yellow/orange spots are unnecessary imo like the two on the far left and the one on his collar
the C doesnt fit at all, neither in place nor style
i feel like the render stands out a lot but that was probably what you wanted
i know that was a boat load of negative stuff but i can see that you know what youre doing and the tag looks pretty decent overall, surely better than what i put out. i just have a hard time picking out positives :ph34r:


No mate, it's been YEARS since I've done some real gfx. I'm also still getting the hang of gimp, it's not nearly as good as ps.
Any feedback is good feedback.

Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ 17 Nov 2021 14:44)
kinda neat, but the blurs make it feel too chaotic, like everything besides the render is almost blurring together


I appreciate it I probably went to hard with the blur while I was trying to create depth.

This post was edited by Ctrlaltkick on Nov 17 2021 02:37pm
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Nov 17 2021 02:38pm
Quote (Mrpond @ 17 Nov 2021 15:32)
nothing wrong with gimp, 95% of my stuff is done with gimp


No I agree, not cutting it down by any means, simply not as used to the tools interface is all.
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Nov 17 2021 02:38pm
Quote (Ctrlaltkick @ Nov 17 2021 08:38pm)
No I agree, not cutting it down by any means, simply not as used to the tools interface is all.


its definitely a learning curve, as for the art itself its very solid
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Quote (Mrpond @ 17 Nov 2021 15:38)
its definitely a learning curve, as for the art itself its very solid



Agreed. Just gathering resources and trying to work on one project a day along with 1 tuturial a week. I used to do it heavily 10 years ago lmao.
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Nov 17 2021 05:54pm
Besides what others said the render looks out of place. Just doesn't match the feel of the environment.
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Nov 20 2021 12:31pm
Don't see a real theme with this. Colors are pretty much all over. The figure focal point doesn't match the background or effects. Just doesn't mesh well. Keep at it.
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