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Jun 1 2017 08:56pm
Its been awhile since I've touched PS

Would like to get back into it, i got a 7 day trial so I'ma have fun for a little while.

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Jun 3 2017 02:18pm
Its okay. Left side is a bit distracting and pulling too much attention but none the less, good job.
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Quote (Slunko @ Jun 3 2017 12:18pm)
Its okay. Left side is a bit distracting and pulling too much attention but none the less, good job.


Thank you for the C/c

i see what you mean, i should have made the left side a little less bright or potentially sharpened the focus a bit more

This post was edited by AlphaofAlphas on Jun 3 2017 07:15pm
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Another Tag, Wanna do 1 or more a day until trial runs out lol



This post was edited by AlphaofAlphas on Jun 3 2017 08:16pm
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Jun 3 2017 09:25pm
I love how this one turned out, still working on the typography..

Ver 1:



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I wanted to add in the black borders because of the explosions makes it more "dramatic"

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This post was edited by AlphaofAlphas on Jun 3 2017 09:44pm
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Quote (AlphaofAlphas @ 4 Jun 2017 02:14)
Thank you for the C/c

i see what you mean, i should have made the left side a little less bright or potentially sharpened the focus a bit more


It's the shape too, its leading eye away from your focal point. (the curve on left leads the eye to your pentool work, which leads it to the bottom left mid section of the sig. I'd go with Tracer (capital T) and make the width fit with the red box.
Second one is also decent but the left side white box might be unnecessary since wings lead the eye nicely to the focus. + is positioned a bit too high and its bothering me a lot. Pentooling top right is oversharpened.
Last one is good, but font choices in last two are whack. Work on your typography since it seems to be your weakest point.

Overall good work, it seems to me you know what you are doing and i like your palette and colour choices but you need the final oomph to get em there, nothing but small mistakes which are easy to fix. Keep it up!

EDIT: You are welcome to join tagworm if you have the time!

This post was edited by Slunko on Jun 4 2017 04:59am
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Jun 4 2017 04:34pm
Borders are fine, giant borders are fine, uneven borders are never fine
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Jun 4 2017 05:24pm
Quote (Xandriia @ 4 Jun 2017 17:34)
Borders are fine, giant borders are fine, uneven borders are never fine


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