Quote (AlphaofAlphas @ 4 Jun 2017 02:14)
Thank you for the C/c
i see what you mean, i should have made the left side a little less bright or potentially sharpened the focus a bit more
It's the shape too, its leading eye away from your focal point. (the curve on left leads the eye to your pentool work, which leads it to the bottom left mid section of the sig. I'd go with Tracer (capital T) and make the width fit with the red box.
Second one is also decent but the left side white box might be unnecessary since wings lead the eye nicely to the focus. + is positioned a bit too high and its bothering me a lot. Pentooling top right is oversharpened.
Last one is good, but font choices in last two are whack. Work on your typography since it seems to be your weakest point.
Overall good work, it seems to me you know what you are doing and i like your palette and colour choices but you need the final oomph to get em there, nothing but small mistakes which are easy to fix. Keep it up!
EDIT: You are welcome to join tagworm if you have the time!
This post was edited by Slunko on Jun 4 2017 04:59am