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Jun 25 2016 12:02pm
Hey guys, I m designing my new portfolio and I need some feedback and idea for 1 section on main page :)

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Jun 26 2016 12:07am
Design for mobile before desktop
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Jun 26 2016 12:43am
its on bootstrap, wont be problem
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Jun 26 2016 08:44am
bootstrap only helps with grid layouts.

what are you doing to your nav bar and how does your diagonals lay out as mobile

also your nav isn't aligned to anything

also do you have a js for your circle buttons cause just having circle buttons is boring and the roman numerals is kind of lame and unreadable

This post was edited by Sena on Jun 26 2016 08:45am
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Jun 26 2016 02:02pm
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bootstrap only helps with grid layouts.

Well for mobile version I m thinking of slice page in half and put everything one by one.

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also your nav isn't aligned to anything

yea, I might make it more width

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also do you have a js for your circle buttons cause just having circle buttons is boring and the roman numerals is kind of lame and unreadable

Its going supposed to be sub-galleries, you click and you get full image and hover shows color version, also good point, those roman numerals are bad
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Jun 26 2016 06:48pm
I don't know much about this sort of thing but just for my opinion based on how I think it looks..

- I'm not a fan of the first page. The bottom half of it seems ok but top half is ugly though.
- Text text on the about page imo is a tad too small.
- I also am not a fan of the "work" section though I can't pin point what I don't like about it.
*again, I don't know shit.

Sorry this really doesn't give you anything to work with lol but just thought I'd share my opinion.
Your art is so sick though. I'm still obsessed with the wolf girl and I'd wear that on a shirt.
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Jun 26 2016 09:08pm
Quote (kenshinkiba @ Jun 27 2016 05:02am)
Well for mobile version I m thinking of slice page in half and put everything one by one.


yea, I might make it more width


Its going supposed to be sub-galleries, you click and you get full image and hover shows color version, also good point, those roman numerals are bad


if youre using a lightbox, think about just using rectangles, going from round buttons to full image loses its relationship and kind of fucks with experience depending on what kind of lightbox you use

it'll also give your work more space to be displayed as icons.
as for the numbering just remove it. you can always just use css to change the image when you hover

the hardest part about the diagonal boxes is when youre using boostrap they might not align properly when they stack. think about creating another layout that might be mobile exclusive

This post was edited by Sena on Jun 26 2016 09:09pm
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Jul 12 2016 03:10pm
keep an even spacing for ur nav and take out the lines underneath. keep the same grid layout for all the pages..page 3 is horizontal while rest are vertical
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Jul 15 2016 06:14am
Quote (kenshinkiba @ Jun 25 2016 02:02pm)
Hey guys, I m designing my new portfolio and I need some feedback and idea for 1 section on main page :)

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/58360869/Work/Kenshin2016.jpg


I love the dota 2 reference
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Jul 16 2016 12:12am

Bit updated version
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