homepage design for practice, i suck ass at web design so i need cnc from you pros



mostly looking for old fag cnc since they know what they're talking about

i like it, would enjoy the site - its easy to know whats going on, but i'd go for more vivid colors - thats the only cnc i can give
other than that, great work!

to me the font you used for the top bar (home, about, etc) doesnt fit
i would probably go for a bolder one if you want to keep the cursive
like all the other text is bold and in your face and that stuff on top is like a little scribble
otherwise it looks good id say
and i dont understand why the middle text has a gradient on it. to put emphasis on the "baked donuts for you" i guess? would like to know why you went with that

the top bar has a more personalized feel with the handwritish cursiveish font, which fits in with the donuts. I also don't want to use a Bold text because it stands out to much and takes away from the main thing.

the middle its not a gradient, it's just a subtle different color to emphasize that they're beautifully and deliciously done.

oh well, i didnt read the bottom part of your post lol
still nice to know the thought process behind your work

Maybe that cta should stand out more.
Could just use a different color, perhaps one from a sprinkle.