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Aug 7 2014 11:22am


What do you all think? I'm open to advises etc :)
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Aug 7 2014 12:45pm
I like it
nice colors and text
only thing I don't like are the white flares around the render
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Aug 7 2014 01:12pm
Quote (Conor @ Aug 7 2014 08:45pm)
I like it
nice colors and text
only thing I don't like are the white flares around the render


Thanks :)
I attempted to make another one, here is the outcome so far let me know how this one is aswell!

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Aug 7 2014 04:01pm
First is good, second looks pretty bad though
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Aug 7 2014 04:34pm
Quote (Arcaeus @ Aug 8 2014 12:01am)
First is good, second looks pretty bad though


Thanks, yeah I didnt like that one either too much.
I tried some black and white, what do you think?

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Aug 7 2014 06:06pm
Why are you screen shotting them like that lol
Just upload it as a png file
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Aug 8 2014 02:17am
Quote (Arcaeus @ Aug 8 2014 02:06am)
Why are you screen shotting them like that lol
Just upload it as a png file


Idk, just felt more convinient here is the sig
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Aug 8 2014 08:00am
you're getting better.


except for the second one, they all look fine. Always keep in mind your color palette and adjustments. The first one looks a bit to messy (lens flar, some parts too sharp/contrasted etc). i like your current one the most, it's so crisp and sharp. However, you should be careful with b/w pieces. never use b/w as crutches if you're struggling with colors. a black and white piece has to be designed around it
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you can start reading about some more advanced techniques (complex manips, smudging, composition etc), but you're doing pretty good. If you want some good advice, try avoiding repeating the same things and steps over and over again. by trying weird or different things, you will have a higher chance of failing, but you will learn more if you are out of your comfort zone.
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Aug 8 2014 08:41am
Quote (Claire @ Aug 8 2014 04:00pm)
you're getting better.


except for the second one, they all look fine. Always keep in mind your color palette and adjustments. The first one looks a bit to messy (lens flar, some parts too sharp/contrasted etc). i like your current one the most, it's so crisp and sharp. However, you should be careful with b/w pieces.  never use b/w as crutches if you're struggling with colors. a black and white piece has to be designed around it
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you can start reading about some more advanced techniques (complex manips, smudging, composition etc), but you're doing pretty good. If you want some good advice, try avoiding repeating the same things and steps over and over again. by trying weird or different things, you will have a higher chance of failing, but you will learn more if you are out of your comfort zone.


Awesome critisiscm, and I totally agree.
Will do my best to improve for further tags :)
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