A big step back from the last

Focus on getting colours correct. Also make it more interesting create some depth with blur and sharpen and layers.
Putting a render on a backgroundand adding a few dots doesnt do much, Delve deeper into it. enjoy photoshop and really focus dont just whack things together.
Keep it up!

Sorry for this terrible art, was kind-of in a rush, and had no clue what to do, so i just uploaded it, as it was