this is my currect project just a ruff sketch atm i wanted to no
1. how does it look like shape/ of limbs etc
2. what colors would best go with this
3. any ideyas on what to add to it




This post was edited by serpin on Mar 14 2014 09:22am

And you made another thread for this... why?

make her rite arm longer, show boob, and shorten skirt.
change the face little bit than u are good.

-Right arm is too short, you might have intended to forshorten but its not working.

-you have the shoulder shrugged forward, it would look more natural shrugged back. Try acting out the pose you have with the thoracic extension, the head forward, and the shoulder forward, it feels weird.

-the dress would not drape like that, think about which direction she is moving, and which direction the wind is moving


Looks much better than your last entry though, keep drawing

cu_luu'd

you broke her shoulder off her upper body on the right arm look at the shape you made and try to imitate it it doesn't make sense nor does it make sense visually

right arm is too short

her ankles are swollen i can see you shaped it out but it makes her feet look tiny

eyes too high

thank you for the feedback ill try and fix what i can

but this is supost to be anime style type of sketch but stuff like the arm etc ill fix

um and the eye its to high?

also as for the skirt i wanted it to be a more taste full type of sketch hence no clevage/pantie shot

to boring of a picture without?

just because it's anime doesn't mean there is no anatomy