appreciated*

This post was edited by Melodude on Feb 20 2014 09:59pm

couples things i dont like:

the yellow on the right feels really forced and too bright in contrast with the left one.

the way you blurred her hair looks unnatural and makes your render looks choppy.


there's some pretty interesting/cool effects going on, but i think the composition needs a bit of work. it's all over the place.

I agree with the yellow blotches and the blurring on the hair is a bit much. The arm gripping her blends in quite a lot but the hand pops a bit and I'm not so sure how I feel about it.

I do like it a lot, though.

i think that i really dont like this

Ok, backstory on the piece.

I had a really nice background, in my opinion:


I tried to add a render, and failed terribly.

Needs Another color imo. Try adding Purple

Try using a render with more detail and not an anime one.

Your going for that orange-yellow-green analogous color scheme but its just not working at all with those ratios/saturations IMO


I think pick a different render without green hair