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Sep 23 2013 12:22am
But hold her down with soggy clothes and breezeblocks



This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Sep 23 2013 12:39am
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Sep 23 2013 12:29am
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Sep 23 2013 02:22am)
But hold her down with soggy clothes and breezeblocks

http://i.imgur.com/wPQNU8T.png


interesting, i didnt know you did this. is the left part of her lip supposed to fade away ? also some of the scales look much better than others?? line thickness or something
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Sep 23 2013 12:37am
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Sep 23 2013 12:29am)
interesting, i didnt know you did this. is the left part of her lip supposed to fade away ? also some of the scales look much better than others?? line thickness or something


This is my first vector piece. Ahhh forgot about that little gradient. Fixing thanks !

and yesh, the scales were a bish to do... so as you can tell, I got sloppy with them and ya.... wont make that mistake again.

This post was edited by UncleMuscles on Sep 23 2013 12:38am
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Sep 23 2013 01:26am
turned out nb, some of your lines on the jaw line especially could use some work, and there's some weird lighting shit going on, but nb

also, next time try to add some more shading on the face to bring out the nose and cheek bones and shit

This post was edited by Nereaux on Sep 23 2013 01:27am
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Sep 23 2013 05:35am
Damn dude that's sexy, and breezeblocks!
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Sep 23 2013 05:36am
At first glance it looked awesome imo, but not flawless.
Mostly what bothers me is the snake, as stated b4 the scales and the lighting and that snake head that seems to pop out from nowhere.
And could bring forth some cheek bones imo, reali would lift it some.
However I reali do like the mouth with drool, and the Eyes.

Very good first try!
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Sep 23 2013 07:23am
very nice tanner but ugh that swine nose bothers me look at it its a bit piggy and other areas but for first attempt :) nice job also fade those shade zones and the mouth edges and finish the LOWER lip next time heheheheeheh but please do another or touch this up would like to see where you go with this cuz your good tanner

This post was edited by aotisin on Sep 23 2013 07:28am
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Sep 23 2013 02:23pm
the scales are weird

also the lower lip having a drastic lack of detail compared to the upper lip l:

linework on ears look like hair

but vn1
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Sep 23 2013 03:05pm
cool stuff, wonderful pallet

for cnc, eyebrows ears and hair are a bit dull
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Sep 23 2013 03:17pm
scales are meh... but i like the concept and the colours so much. nice work bro.
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