Quote (zell1luk @ Sep 4 2013 04:05pm)
Tonights attempt:
http://i40.tinypic.com/2lcw8yd.png
your attempts at blending are appreciated, but not effective in this case. the effects aren't horrible, but they need to be consolidated so that your signature has some sort of composition or flow. i like to think of composition in terms of negative space vs positive space.
for example, if we take a look at your tag in black and white:
you'll notice there's nothing that sticks out in terms of value; it looks flat, except for the pure black in your render contrasting with the "glow" that's surrounding it. while framing your focal with contrast is generally a good thing, the overall composition of your tag is lackluster.
something to note about composition is that it's acceptable to frame your focal in what are called compositional shapes, you can find videos and examples of this on google.
stay away from premade brushes or random soft brushing; instead, try to focus on the natural lighting present in your render or stock, and build from there.
some good tips and tricks to follow and swear by for now (google them):
- rule of thirds
- rule of odds
- compositional shapes
- complementary colors
- negative vs positive space